'HOT off the Street' DPS Development

Bold title at the top with a kicker to the side. The kicker is a little explanation about what the article is, and gives the reader an overview of what they can expect from the article.
Large images are easy to see, and are all proportionate to each other.
Alternate names next to the models because they can't all fit in on one level... 

Made the images smaller because there wasn't enough room to fit in any text around or underneath the images.
Title made bright pink and eyecatching to grab the attention of the reader.

Creation of 'personal profiles' title icon in Photoshop.

I later deleted the yellow text to just make a pink bubble with the words essentially 'cut out' of it.

 My ideas for this double page spread are to have each of the models on the top half of the page with annotations of where their clothes are from.

I will then have their 'personal profiles' underneath their position on the page. These profiles are questions about themselves (like a mini interview) and their own style.
I chose bright pink as a colour scheme for this page because I thought that it was quite funky and eyecatching. The blue dots across the middle of the page act as a seperator between the image area and the personal profile area.

Addition of 'personal profiles'.

I changed each persons name to the same bright pink as the title of the page. This makes it stand out from the rest of the profile, and makes it easier to identify the name of the girl.
I also shifted all of the names of the girls up to the left hand side of each of their heads so that they were all on level. This makes the page more symmetrical and professional looking - whereas before they were at different heights and it looked messy.